第一篇：aorb观点选择型作文
A or B观点选择型作文
作文套路一： A or B
Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, form my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. The main reason for my propensity for A is that ____________________. 就理由进行解释 _______________________. For instance, ________________________. Another reason can be seen by every one is that ____________________. 就理由进行解释 _______________________. For example, ________________________. The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because _____________________________________________________. Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as _____________________. In a word, _______________________________________________________. So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.
作文套路二： A or B
将原题复述______________________________________________________When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would deem that ______________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/B-, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity for ________ is that ________. The second reason can be seen by every person that ________. In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that ________. There are some disadvantages in ________另一种观点的缺点______. In a wore, ________重复观点句并缩写理由________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that __________.
作文套路三： 单一命题式
The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point of view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it sagacious to ________. Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for _______ is that _______. Another reason can be seen by every person is that _______. Furthermore, ________. In short, ________复述前文中的理由_______.
作文套路四： agree or disagree
Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _______. But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would
explore only a few primary ones here. The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant of the basic fact that _______解释本段中心_______。
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that _______. What is more, some students are interested in _______. In a word, _______.
作文文套五： A or B
Some people prefer to A. others believe B. when faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that _______, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why _______, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.
The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that _______. Take _______ as example, _______. There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as _______. Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that _______. (examples: _______). From the above you might got idea that I agree _______. (repeat the above three reasons_______). So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______.
作文文套六： Agree or disagree
Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that _______, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that _______. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. One of the primary causes is that _______. Examples _______. But there is a further more subtle point we must consider. Examples. What is more _______. Examples _______. General speaking, _______. Recognizing the fact that _______ should drive us to conclude that _______.
作文文套七： A or B
From my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than, B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among countless factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For example, _______ Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance, _______. It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important. B ____也好___. In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.
作文文套八： A or B
When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.
We may look into every possible reason, however, foremost reason for B is _____. For example, _____. Also, _____.
This is arbitrary to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.
Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that _____.
Admittedly, _____A也有好的地方_____. By he same token, however, _____B更好____. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____.
作文文套九：
When it comes to _____, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
I agree with the statement that _____ without reservation since _____. Naturally _____ . It can be given a concrete example _____ .
A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of _____ is that. Obviously _____ . Take the case of a thing that _____.
Furthermore, what is worth noticing fact is that _____. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that _____.
Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, _____ 此处论述B的1-2优点_____.
But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that _____.
作文文套十：
_____改写并复述题目_____. There may be one or two disadvantages to _____; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to _____ is that _____. For instance, _____. Another drawback to _____ involves the possibility that _____. For example, _____. Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to _____, the advantages far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for _____ is that _____. For example, _____. Another reason for my inclination for _____ is that _____. For example, _____. In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _____, I feel that the advantages are more obvious _____重复优点_____. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____.
作文文套十二： A or B _____改写并复述题目_____. The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A. There are numerous reasons why _____, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones
here. One of the primary cause is that _____ _____.
What is also worth noticing fact is that _____ _____. Furthermore, _____ _____. Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to _____ I fell that the advantages are more obvious _________. _________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say that ________.
作文文套十三： A or B _____(改写和复述原题)_____. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that _______, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence _____, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity for ______is that _______. Another reason can be seen by every person is that _________. The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because __________. In a word, __________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _______________.
作文文套十四： A or B From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. The main reason for my propensity for ______ is that ______. There is another factor that deserves some words here. In a word, _______________. While it is true that the argument I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think _____________.
作文文十五： agree or disagree Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that _____________. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that __________. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. I agree with the statement that __________ without reservation since ________. Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that _________. In a word, ____________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that __________.
第二篇：英语作文;议论文的框架1)不同观点列举型(选择型).
英语作文模板; 议论文的框架1 不同观点列举型(选择型)议论文的框架 (1 不同观点列举型(选择型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一
或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
第三篇：如何选择美国投资移民项目-金北方移民观点
据金北方移民网了解，截止到今年10月，美移民局批准的区域中心数达419个，而每个区域中心或多或少有几个不同的项目在推广，面对名目繁多的区域中心投资项目，如何做出明智的选择将是投资人迈向成功的第一步。以下为金北方移民专家总结的关于投资者如何在众多的移民项目中选择适合自己的项目。 第一，一个公司同一时期不可能代理太多项目。
如果代理项目太多，这个公司没有那么多精力去核实每个项目，做所谓的“尽职调查”。不做调查，公司选项目与你自己选项目没区别。 所以我喜欢那种比较专一的移民公司。
第二，如果顾问跟你宣传“政府担保，或者政府支持，州长。。。”，千万别信。
这是拿中国的思维想外国的事骗中国人的钱。美国都是靠法律说事的。 州长就是一个公务员，他不能、也不会为了一个商业项目去担保、去违反规定或者法律。 这种项目通常没有什么拿得出手的优势，全靠忽悠。我去过美国，也和在美国的朋友聊过，感觉在美国做生意就是踏踏实实的做好生意，这种最稳妥。第三，尽量选择有经验的团队开发的项目。
例如，有的项目分成几期招募投资者，如果以前阶段的投资人已经获得I-526批准，说明项目的结构基本没有问题。可能有人认为这不应该是问题，实际上有可能是个大问题。 我在初期曾经咨询某移民公司参与的某酒店项目，他们做移民很有经验了，但是最近传出这个项目的申请都被拒了(具体信息请搜索网上，我不确定这个消息是否100%正确)，说明是项目的构造不符合EB-5要求。 否则不会全部被拒。第四，永远不要信“这个项目没有风险”。
这说明中介公司根本就没有对项目进行分析与调查。 如果没有风险，就已经违反了移民法，所以被拒是注定的。但事实是，没有商业项目会让投资人的资金没有风险。
金北方移民认为：根据以上这些原则，在某一时期可选的项目并不多。您可能好奇了，我到底选的是哪个项目呢?这里金北方移民专家推荐您美国CMB区域中心项目，该区域中心为最早的区域中心之一，，目前I-526及I-829的通过率均为100%;已经有超过800 位申请人通过I-526批准 ;已有超过100位申请人通过I-829批准。了解更多项目情况欢迎咨询4006183080或者致电010-58673080，我们的顾问专家会一对一的跟据客户情况定制VIP移民方案。
第四篇：观点论证型作文
观点论证型作文通常是提出一种观点或现象，要求考生对这一观点或现象进行解释或论证，体裁多为议论文。这种题型常见的结构模式是： 第一段：提出某种观点或现象。
第二段：论证该观点或现象的正确性或危害性。
第三段：结论，再次强调主题，或表明自己的态度、做法。
常用模板(一)
It is true that___________.(普遍的观点) However,__________.(不同的观点/现象) I think_______________.(“我”的观点)The reasons can be listed as follows. Firstly, __________.(论据一) Secondly, ____________.(论据二) For example,_______________.(支持论据二的事例) Thirdly, ______________.(论据三) A case in point is _______________.(支持论据三的事例) It goes without saying/There is no doubt that _______________.(重申观点) Therefore, ___________. (与该观点相符合的做法)In a word,___________.(总结全文)
举例：
Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Wealth and Happiness. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 每个人都想获得财富，财富似乎就是幸福 2. 其实世界上有许多东西是财富换不来的。
Wealth and Happiness
It is true that wealth has always been what people long for. However, wealth doesn’t necessarily mean happiness in today’s world. I think this is reasonable. The reasons can be listed as follows.
Firstly, good health, which can not be bought with money, also plays an important role in a happy life. Secondly, wealth may encourage those weak—willed people to be addicted to some harmful habits and bring about their own ruin. For example, some people spend money on drugs and gambling which in turn make them having nothing. Thirdly, there are something that are indispensable but priceless. A case in point is love.
There is no doubt that wealth is not equal to happiness. Therefore, we should not attach to much importance to wealth. In a word, we should earn money with honest work, but not be crazy about money.
常用模板(二)
Many people believe that _____________.(社会现象/事实现象) The true is deep and profound. As we know,______________.(具体阐述观点的正确性的表现一) In addition, _______________.(具体阐述观点的正确性的表现二)
There are numerous examples supporting this argument. A case in point is
1 ___________.(阐述第一个例子) This is close to suggest _______________.(总结例一，通过举例得出观点正确) For another example, _______.(引出并说明第二个例子) Moreover, _______________.(列举支持论点的具体事例三)
All mentioned above tell us that _____________.(总结上文，重申论点) But (one thing we have to notice is that______________.(提出个人建议) In short,_________.(总结全文，再次强调观点的重要性或正确性)
举例：
Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 怎样理解“有志者事竟成” 2. 试举例说明
Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way
Many people believe the proverb “Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way”. The true is deep and profound. As we know, as long as a person possesses a strong will he will certainly accomplish a task no matter how difficult it is. In addition, if he persists, he will eventually succeed.
There are numerous examples supporting this argument. A case in point is that Karl Marx, who spent five years on his greatest work Das Kapital, won the respect from the people all over the world. This is close to suggest that strong will is vital factor to one’s final success. For another example, Cao Xueqin met lots of hardship in his pursuit for literature, but finally completed the world famous book Dreams of Red Chamber. Moreover, among us college students, those who persist studying hard and make it eventually are also good examples.
All mentioned above tell us that if we wish to succeed, we first have a resolution and remember the saying “Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way”. But one thing we have to notice is that a strong will must be accompanied by a right direction, which shouldn’t be blind. In short, whatever you do, please remember: Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way.
常用模板(三) It is well known that ___________.(开门见山，直接提出论点)The truth is self—evident. No one can deny that ______________.(进一步以我们所知道的道理阐述观点) Therefore, _____________________.(总结第一段，强调要论证的观点) Many remarkable factors / reasons contribute to this argument. First of all, ___________.(列举论证理由一) For example, _____________.(举例说明理由一) What’s more, ________________. (列举论证理由二)Besides, ______________________.(列举论证理由三) All mentioned above tell us that _____________.(承接上文，重申观点) Therefore, there is no denying that ________________.(得出结论或应该采取的做法) In short, _________________.(总结全文，再次强调观点的正确性或重要性)
2 举例：
Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Improving the Chinese People’s English Level. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 提高全民族英语素质的必要性 2. 分析其原因 3. 你的看法
Improving the Chinese People’s English Level It is well known that the importance of grasping English is overemphasized in China. The truth of it is self—evident. No one can deny that English is quite important to us college students. Therefore, improving Chinese people’s overall English level is quite necessary and urgent. Many remarkable reasons contribute to this argument. First of all, with the good command of English, we can better communicate with people from different countries and learn from them to improve ourselves. For example, since more foreigners come to China, and more Chinese go abroad, it is becoming urgent for us to study English well, or we will have difficulties in understanding each other. What’s more, with good knowledge of English, we can take in more advanced technology and management experience, which is very important for our modernization construction. Besides, our nation needs a large number of experts who have a good command of foreign languages. All mentioned above tell us that English is of much importance in every respect of china’s development. Therefore, there is no doubt that every one of us should do our best to improve our English quality and get prepared for the coming challenges and opportunities. In short, improving the Chinese people’s English level is a necessity for China’s development in the future.
常用句型：
● 引出格言的常用举例
1) One of the early writers/famous scientists/ancient philosophers said that …
2) Here is an old saying,…. It is the experience of our forefathers. However, it is correct in many cases even today. 3) Many years ago, a writer/scientist/philosopher remarked(/pointed out/commented) : “…” His words reveals / reflects a truth that…. ● 举例说明的常用句型： 1) Take … for example,… 2) A good case in point is …
3) Perhaps the most important/telling/dramatic/striking example of … is…
4) I can think of no better illustration of the idea/view than the fact/example/case of ... ●事实证明的常用句型：
1) No one can deny/doubt/ignore the fact that …
2) We must face/accept/admit/point out the fact that…
3) It brings out/sets fort/reveals/demonstrates a(n) important(unquestionable) fact
3 that …
4) There is strong/sufficient/considerable evidence that/to show that/as to/against/in favor of …
5) Personal experience / case in history suggest that…. ●深入阐述的过渡常用句型：
1)But that’s only part of the story/explanation. Perhaps the most significant / remarkable / surprising about … is …. 2) Another equally important / essential role (aspect/function/consideration) is…. 3)… is but one of many effects/aspects. Another is …
4) Besides, / In addition to this, / Apart from this, another way/aspect is … ●结论性结尾的常用句型：
1) From what has been discussed above, / Taking into account all these factors, / Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely/reasonably arrive at( come to / reach / draw) the conclusion that …
2) The evidence upon all sides / analysis we have made / reasons we have advanced confirms( points to / leads to) an unshakable conclusion that …. 3) In summary/conclusion/a word/short, it is more important/valuable …
Assignments:
一.观点论证型作文训练：
Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Making a Public Speech. You should write at least 120 words(CET-4) or 150 words(CET-6) and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 演讲能力对大学生来说很重要 2. 试论证该观点
二.应用文作文训练：
1.四级同学完成Test 6 的写作 2.六级同学完成Test 7的写作
第五篇：高考作文观点相反
他山之石，可以攻玉
高考作文训练之
观点相反的组合型材料作文的审题立意
一、作文例题
1.阅读下面这则材料，写一篇文章。
尼采曾说，处世之道应该是：不要爬到山顶去，也不要站在山脚，从半高处去看，这个世界真美好。
杜甫说：会当凌绝顶，一览众山小。
审题立意：
这是一道组合型材料作文。无论是尼采还是杜甫，都是以山为喻来谈处世之道。这是两则材料在话题上的共同点。但在观点上两者则是截然不同的，尼采主张从半高处看世界，杜甫主张站在山顶看世界。到底该站在哪里看世界呢?
可以从以下角度立意：
立意角度一：站在半山腰看，世界最美好 俯视走过的路，我们会为我们的勇气和智慧惊叹，我们会为我们取得的成绩而骄傲;仰视山顶，我们会为山顶壮丽的景观而着迷，从而信心满怀继续攀登。
立意角度二：站在山顶看，世界最美好
经过奋力登攀，终于到达了山顶，放眼望去，一切都尽收眼底。作为过来人的我们，心胸开阔，头脑清醒，不受蒙蔽，步入了人生的最高境界，这个时候看到的一切，又怎么会不美好?
立意角度三：站在哪里看世界不是最重要的，最重要的是无论站在哪里，都能发现世界的美好。
也就是说，只要能够发现世界的美好，不管选择什么立足点来观察欣赏，都是值得肯定的。
2.【2012广东】阅读下面的文字，根据要求作文。
醉心于古文化研究的英国历史学家汤因比曾经说过，如果可以选择出生的时代与地点，他愿意出生在公元一世纪的中国新疆，因为当时那里处于佛教文化、印度文化、希腊文化、波斯文化和中国文化等多种文化的交汇地带。
居里夫人在写给外甥女涵娜的信上说：“你写信对我说，你愿意生在一世纪以前……伊雷娜则对我肯定地说过，她宁可生得晚些，生在未来的世纪里。我以为，人们在每一个时期都可以过有趣而且有用的生活。”
上面的材料引发了你怎样的思考?请结合自己的体验与感悟，写一篇文章。
审题立意：
将两段文字结合起来解读，主要谈论“时代与生活”的话题。汤因比、涵娜、伊雷娜三人的看法是一致的，他们认为，时代影响着人的生活，生活在什么样的时代，就会有什么样的生活。而居里夫人却与三人的看法相反，“人们在每一个时期都可以过有趣而且有用的生活”。
可以在符合材料表层意的引申义中自选角度，„„“引申义”立意角度有：
1 他山之石，可以攻玉
1、由汤因比、涵娜、伊雷娜的选择，引申出“时代与生活”的话题，由此话题引出相关观点。如：选择生活在唐代、活在当下、论改革开放时代与80后人的生活观、哪个时代的人生活最幸福，等等。
2、由居里夫人的话，引申出“人与生活”的话题，由此话题引出相关观点。如：我的生活我做主、有趣而且有用的生活靠我们创建、21世纪，我们应该具有怎样的生活态度，等等。
以上两道材料作文题从其本质看同属观点相反的组合型材料作文，这类作文题的共同特征是：
1、题目中材料涉及的话题是相同的。如第一道作文题两则材料的共同话题是“站在哪里看世界”，广东高考作文则是的“时代与生活”。
2、在此共同话题的基础上，对这个问题有着两种截然不同的看法。如第一道作文题“从半高处去看世界”与“会当凌绝顶，一览众山小”。 广东高考作文“时代影响着人的生活”与“人们在每一个时期都可以过有趣而且有用的生活”。
3、这类作文的立意可以取两个不同观点的任意一个作为切入角度。
要注意两点：
1、有人问，取两个观点中的一个来写，是否意味着审题可以不必理会另一则材料? 答曰：不可以，要两则材料结合起来才能看出共同的话题范围，而文章内容是要在这一话题范围之内的。如有学生提炼出这样的观点：低调做人高调做事，显然偏题了，是只注意一则材料的结果。
2、要注意这种观点相反的组合型作文题与并列式话题作文如“仰望星空与脚踏实地”的区别。“仰望星空与脚踏实地”这一话题中包含了两种不同观点，写作时是两方面都要涉及到的;而观点相反的组合型作文题只要持其中一种观点展开论证即可，对另一观点则不必一定要提及。
二、作文审题：
非洲谚语强调“但”后面的内容，即：一个人不可能走得很远，一群人才能走得更远。它告诉人们：做事要有合作、团队意识;众人智慧胜于个体力量;成功来自集体的团结、协作努力。席慕容的话强调个体走自己的路的重要性和必要性，人生之路有些地方可以依靠别人，但有些路必须自己单独去走、体验，即使路上有坎坷、挫折，也要坚持走下去，因为，这是人生必走之路，不可缺少、无法替代的成长之路。
两则材料说法各有侧重，可以把两则材料综合起来思考，也可以立足一则，兼顾另一则思考，但不能完全把两则材料对立起来看待、理解。
三、他山之石
孤独的人是高贵的
2 他山之石，可以攻玉
有学生发邮件给我，他说他喜欢课余翻阅《红楼梦》《麦田里的守望者》等名著，不晓得明星八卦，也不关心成绩排名，和同学们往往话不投机，觉得自己很孤独。我回信告诉他，有一首歌叫“孤独的人是可耻的”，它错了，应该是“孤独的人是高贵的”。
一些人总把“孤单”与“孤独”混为一谈。孤单，基本上指形体而言：茕茕孑立，形影相吊。孤单，会产生精神上的寂寞、思念，往下走，便是无聊;往上而去，才是孤独。但很多人其实上不了那个层次。孤独，基本上是精神层面的。因为有些人，即使他置身于人群中，他也是孤独的。比如鲁迅，在一个满是沉睡者的铁屋子里，仍要孤独地呐喊几声。
孤独，意味着与众不同。当一个社会，“举世皆浊”“众人皆醉”时，你仍然保留清白保持清醒，你可能被世俗边缘化了，但你却拥有了一颗高贵的灵魂。有些人，在人生之路上，注定要孤独前行，独自承担一切。北宋仁宗时，有个宰相叫吕夷简，位高权重，滥用私人，朝廷腐败不堪。百官都巴结阿谀他，偏偏有个人向皇上连上奏折，检举吕夷简。那个人便是“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”的范仲淹。检举的下场自然不妙，他被贬官，还差点丢了性命。但是范仲淹仍然无怨无悔，他说自己“宁鸣而死，不默而生”。一千多年后，他的同乡林昭实现了这个诺言。林昭，北大才女，在大饥荒时，她调查民情，写信给中央领导反映民间疾苦。结果，她被视作“反革命分子”，被捕入狱。在狱中，她仍用血书为自己辩白。最终，她于1968年被枪决，年仅36岁。
无论范仲淹，还是林昭，他们当时面临的困境，是芸芸众生们也面对的，但为何只有他们站了出来，并且说了出来?因为他们胸中有一种叫良知的东西，不断撞击他们的心坎，使得真理如杜鹃啼血般唤出。当年，范仲淹的朋友劝他不要做“一只专门叫唤的乌鸦”，只管自己吃喝便好;林昭的亲友也劝她不要做“碰石头的鸡蛋”：他们在人生道路上是孤独的。然而，时过境迁，大浪淘沙之后，他们的精神终于闪出了高贵的光芒。
夜深人静的时候，有人在庸庸碌碌，有人在纸醉金迷，而我，更愿意泡一杯茶，思考一下“我们是谁?我们从哪里来?要到哪里去?”，写点文字。那封回信的最后，我写道：“做一个精神明亮的孤独者吧!走自己的路，让别人去说吧!”
行路人生
我在天光初透的草舍醒来，只有我一个人。我踌躇着，不知是在这里等待抑或独自上路。我面对着苍茫荒野，大声道：“如果你想走得快，一个人走;如果你想走得远，一群人走。那么你告诉我，该孤独上路还是结伴而行?”荒原里一片岑寂。猎猎风声似要撕魂裂魄。
“你的心意我无从知晓。但我势必选择孤独上路。”你的声音冉起，震得我惊喜交加。我溯着你的声音之源，忆起你笔下祥林嫂的凄惨与抗争。
你说，凡是一人有了新主张，得了赞同，是促其前进的;得了反对，是促其奋斗的。若呐喊于生人前，而生人不语，既非赞同，也无反对，这是怎样的悲哀啊。你于是以之为寂寞。我了解你的抗争。在那样一个黑暗年代，你以笔为戟，独自上路，竟生生地把黑暗撕出一片光明来。国人在光亮中惊醒。你走得比世人
3 他山之石，可以攻玉
都快了些，你路上的寂寞亦如夜夜搓揉灵魂的猛兽。你的孤独只被你在拈笔一笑中了然。你用笔，用鲜血，勇担当一切的勇气，为世人引路。你身后的一群人，也因此走得更快，更快。我对着荒野，微笑着说：“先生，你是勇者。”
“当众人齐集河畔高声歌唱生活，我必定返回空无一人的山峦。”我坐在地上，听着海子微微的吟诵。
你说，我不愿与他人在熙攘中前行，我宁愿独自踏上心灵之路。无关快慢，无关远近，只愿收割路的幽深，面朝大海，春暖花开。我了解你这种“只可自怡悦，不堪持赠君”的心境。你在一曲排箫中走上自己的路途。一如那篱落菊花、梅妻鹤子。你以身奏的梵音，是诱人入梦的，只有执着于心灵之路的人才梦得进去。清茶布衣，麝香酴醾，乐得出世客的逍遥。
荒野里回声渐起，从“独居其涧，硕人之薖。吾寐宿歌，永矢弗谖”，【应是“考盘在涧，硕人之宽。独寤寐言，永矢弗谖。”
(《诗?卫风?考盘》)意思为：敲盘取乐山溪旁，贤人宽宏而大量。独睡醒来自言语，此中乐趣永不忘】到“世间权钱烧似火(应是：从听世人权似火)，不能烧得卧云心”;从“众人之途，当为远行”到“我与世界一同上路”。我在一片响声中释然。
行路人生，总须有些甘愿领受寂寞独自开路的个人，他们走得快，经受的磨难也更多，但他们不仅觅得本心，也为后来的结伴行人开辟出小道。一群人相互扶持，势必走得更慢更远。正是这样一群人，垒起了人类文明的金字塔。
我拾起背包，决定孤独上路。
点 评：
这是一篇议论性的散文，文章脉络清晰，开头写了自己的踌躇：“不知是在这里等待抑或独自上路”。中间用第二人称写了鲁迅和海子的启示，结尾再写“我拾起背包，决定孤独上路。”文章紧紧扣住题目“一个人走”与“一群人走”的关系来写。文章既展现了作者广阔的阅读面，作者对鲁迅、对海子都有深入的了解，对他们的作品、对《诗经》等经典也有独到的体会;文章还展现了作者深厚的语言功底，比如“在那样一个黑暗年代，你以笔为戟，独自上路，竟生生地把黑暗撕出一片光明来。”“你走得比世人都快了些，你路上的寂寞亦如夜夜搓揉灵魂的猛兽。”等语句就非常形象生动，非常有感染力。(评分：58分)
孤独者，自远方
孤独，是人生而具有的本性。孤独是一条黑暗的铁轨，你永远不知道前面会有什么，毁灭抑或光明。有人说：“如果你想走得快，一个人走。”时代的先驱与社会的推进者是走得快的人。他们都是孤独者。
为何?因为没有世俗繁琐的牵绊，没有与同伴内讧的机会，他们孤独向前，仅凭孤勇。
梵·高孤独，身为一个艺术家，他的孤独感尤其明显，人们无法理解他的作品。贫困、饥饿将他压迫得发疯，用手术刀为自己刻下最后一笔。但是一亿七千万的《向日葵》却证明他的水平比同期作者前进几许，他不是疯子。他只是一个孤独行前于其他画家的人。
孤独者往往不能得到当时世人的理解，因为他们的思维方式高于现世，不能
4 他山之石，可以攻玉
被固定的先入为主的民众所理解与支持。孤独的先行者便会从内心感到一种难以驱散的阴霾，只能埋首于他们孤独的事业之中。爱因斯坦性格孤僻，小
时曾被老师责骂不可理喻，却提出了相对论这个伟大的观点;司马迁蒙受奇耻大辱，在众人不齿之下，含泪挥就一部坎坷壮阔的史诗;哥白尼坚持真理的火炬不会熄灭，提出的日心说不被世人理解，便用生命去推动真理的前行。
所以，疯子是孤独的，天才也是孤独的。
真正孤独者是坚贞于自己的内心，抵得住诱惑，淡泊以明志，宁静以致远。居里夫人将奖牌当成给孩子的玩具，钱钟书谢绝记者采访，他们需要的是专心“坐冷凳”的孤独与安静。哪怕“发明大王”爱迪生一生发明数不胜数，但他在晚年浮躁，喜爱名利，也就算不上是一个真正的孤独者。
孤独者在引领技术走向，推动社会发展的同时，也要注意民众的“同化”。人的性格中隐约有群体意识，会理所当然地少数服从多数，孤独者要不有舌战群儒的本领，就要有充耳不闻的本事。很多人本是一个人走，被呼喊几声，便成了芸芸众生的一员。所以孤独者“高处不胜寒”，少而珍贵，受到世人的敬仰或是不解。
如果你想走得快，请一个人走吧。成就大业的人总得忍受常人不能忍受的孤独，苦心孤诣，不迷失于众。孤独者，自远方。
点 评：
文章很好地诠释了“孤独”和“远方”以及他们的关系，通过时代先驱梵·高、爱因斯坦、司马迁、哥白尼等不被人理解的孤独以及他们取得的成就，得出了“疯子是孤独的，天才也是孤独的”的观点。又用居里夫人、钱钟书的事例说明孤独者“抵得住诱惑，淡泊以明志，宁静以致远。”并且用爱迪生来说明什么是正真的孤独者，全文观点新颖深刻，富有辩证性，材料丰富典型，有说服力，语言表达流畅。评分：(53分)
上 路
风继续肆虐，梨花飘落一地。一柄折扇，镌上寥寥数语，提上一把缭竹青灯，披起长袍，就这样，上路了。
世上纷扰，诸事冗余，我孤身地出发，只影地前进。我认为无牵无念，方能如那风一般疾速地前行。我以为我是骄傲不可一世的。
如果想走得快，就一个人走。
陈鸥说，梦想是注定孤独的旅程。我们各有各的路途，我唯有孑然一个，握紧心中一支未灭的烛火。我的生活很清净，一个人在晨风里起床，踩着一地的静谧，上课时安静地疾书，课间捧上一株青绿，于阳光下享受温暖的刺骨。我一个人奋斗，无所顾虑，跌倒了，自己爬起来，拍拍尘土继续上路。一个人的时候，可以冷静地人之自己的脑与心，淡然地在路途的跌宕里学会自己光合作用，唱歌给自己听，脚步飞快只因无所羁绊。我不过是想要走得快一些，再快一些，离我期待的远方近一些，更近一些。所以我选择孤单上路。
而我终究发觉这是不必的。孤独的心太烈，快然却如长眠般清苦，而且始终其实是逆着风前行。因而我割裂了黑白的世界。
相比走得快，我更渴求能走得远。
路上是需要搀扶的。因而我终于愿意与你们并肩战斗。我接受着你们用你们
5 他山之石，可以攻玉
的生命刻写在我生命力的华彩。当我跌倒了，你们为我停下自己的脚步，伸出手来，只为了搀扶我一把;当我又重新站起来了，你们用厚实的手掌推我一把，让我继续前行;我心里的烛火灭了，你们替我拭去烛泪，又添上更亮的火光;我的孤独寂寥，我们一起干干杯，都给吃掉了;我开始觉得，你们带来的温暖像为我双肋插上羽翼，我从而得以飞得更高远。那么，亲爱的，你们教会了我成长也教会了我爱，你们与我一并上路，然我看见了从未瞧过的世界。
你们是我新的烛火。我的路因而更闪耀。
携手的并进，就能相互勉励着走得更远。
“从前啊，我以为我是神，我挥舞我手中的巨刃，斩下无数的光荣。我以为我能越走越快，我以为孤独是往前走最大的力量。风继续肆虐，而梨花落满地，却仿佛两个契机都不需要，仿佛那就是本能，我摒弃了孤寂，和我爱的人们一起继续上路。我看见我的折扇就此添缀了不同的色彩，我的长袍飘扬得更为优雅。所以我还能走得更踏实更绵远更光鲜，”我说，对着镜子里蓬头垢面的时间，“羁绊反而让我、让当下的我走得更远。”
又或者，其实孤寂无罪，欢腾无罪，不同的只是我视野的尽头是否一直鞭长莫及。而我，当下，我宁可在我江郎才尽之前，在我与你们变得白头如新之前，为了能走得更快更远，而执子之手，悭然上路。
点 评：
这是一篇融抒情和说理于一体的散文，文章用散文的笔调，写出自己的情感，抒发内心的感受，前半部分“一个人走”，后半部分写“携手的并进”，走得更远。全文中心明确，重点突出，第一人称的运用，使感受的表达更真切，更形象。本文语言精练生动，比如“可以冷静地人之自己的脑与心，淡然地在路途的跌宕里学会自己光合作用”、“我心里的烛火灭了，你们替我拭去烛泪，又添上更亮的火光”、“你们带来的温暖像为我双肋插上羽翼，我从而得以飞得更高远”等语句，都表现出作者深厚的语言功底，也加强了说理的形象性。(评分：53分)
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