高二英语作文范文第1篇
月考作文讲评
作文讲评要点
本篇命题作文为“生活的味道”，要求写自己生活中的人和事，说真话，抒真情，切忌胡编乱造。
本篇作文存在问题仍然较多，讲评可从以下几点入手。
1、 切题。
文章要切合题目写，题目也可说是文章的灵魂。 本文题为“生活的味道”，那就要通过叙事写出生活的一点感受或一些感受，这种感受用比喻的手法说即是“味道”。要通过叙事来说明：生活究竟有何种味道，要明确，是甜?是苦?还是其他味道?这一点一定要明确，但很多同学不明确，文章洋洋洒洒写到最后，含糊地说“生活的滋味就是这样”，“生活中我有很多滋味”。这种文章可视为不够切题。
有的文章从头至尾，没有看见“生活的味道”几个字，完全写的另外的内容，如“生活的色彩”，“亲情的美好”，“爱的可贵”，等等，虽然也写到“生活”，却没有写到一点“味道”，可视为偏题。
2、 选材
本文要从生活中选材，要写事件，写自己参与的事件，看来的听来的事，间接知道的事，虽也可写，但缺少真切感，不能感染人。
有的同学也记叙，却是以写人为主，套用了“一个尊敬的人”的内容来写，重心偏离，不能很好表达主题。
有的同学写事件，写了四五个片断，中间并没有什么联系，显得零碎，没有明确的中心。 好的选材，写一个事件或两个有关联的事件，从事件中感受到生活的味道，中心明确，前后联贯。这篇作文宜写一种或两种味道，如苦，如甜，如从苦到甜。不宜什么味道都写。800字的文章，主题一定要明确集中，不要写得太庞杂，挖一口井，见到水，不要挖很多井，都不见水。写很多滋味，却都蜻蜓点水，吃力不讨好。具体可参见好作文。
3、 立意
立意即是文章的主题。主题要挖掘得深刻一些，有点高度，让人读了之后有一定启发。很多同学写的文章，主题停留在“生活就有甜酸苦辣”，“生活中什么味道都有”，“我的生活就是这样”，没有议论出生活有这种味道的意义。
很多同学不会适当议论，更不会点题。
其实，有时一两句画龙点睛的句子可使文章生色不少，可提高5至6分的分数。如同样写“生活就有甜酸苦辣”，但如加上几句 “这些滋味都是生活的赠予，甜酸苦辣都有价值，都让我明白生活的真谛：只有经过艰辛努力，才能由苦变作甜，才能最终尝到生活甘美的味道。” 有的同学叙事详写了“生活中的苦味”，也可适当议论点题，如加上这样的话：“生活的滋味是厚重的，在如今的生活中，我或许更多尝到的是苦味，但生活着就有希望，相信以后我的生活不会只有这一种滋味。”立意马上高了不少，表现了作者在生活中的坚忍不拔。
4、 结构
写文章要有结构意识。要明白记叙文什么样的结构是好的，不能让文章像一盘散沙，没有好的结构。
开头。开头如开门见山记叙，会很生动。也可以适当议论，写两三行，不能议论过多。
中间。写一件或两件事，800字的文章，不宜写过多的事件。有的同学中间写“甜”“酸”“苦”“辣”四个标题，写四件事，势必平均使用力量，每部分都蜻蜓点水，写不深刻，文章显得零散，吃力不讨好。这种“甜酸苦辣”的四部分结构当戒。
如写一件事，描写细腻一些，要写出点波澜。如一位同学写生活的甜味，写一家人难得相聚去火车站看火车，这个事件挺不错。但如平铺直叙写，先写计划议论，再写上路，再写看到火车，再写回来，显得单调。为什么不在路上穿插一段回忆呢，既然主题是亲情的甘美，可穿插写一段“从前家人忙碌难得相聚，彼此疏远，亲情失落”的往事呢，这样一写，主题就深一些了，事件也生动了。
如写两件事，两年事应该是有关联的，如都写学习方面的事件，可从“苦”写到“甜”，体现前后的逻辑关系，又能提高文章立意：只有经过生活的苦，才能尝到生活的甜。如写亲情的甘美，也可写两件事，从“亲情的失落苦涩”写到“亲情的回归”，体现生活的甜味。事件间有逻辑联系，往往中心就明确而集中。
两个事件之间应该有几句议论的话，来过渡。没有过渡，显得突兀。过渡勾联上下文，也点题，作用很大。议论宜两三句话即可，不可长篇大论。
结尾。结尾要点题。如果你在开头或中间已点过题，你结尾含蓄一点也可。但大多数同学没有写含蓄有味的结尾的能力，还是点一下题为好。总结点出生活中感受的味道，点出这种味道给人的启示，在以后生活中还会有怎样的影响。结尾议论不宜太长，三四句即可。太长变画蛇添足。
另外，也可采用倒叙，插叙等手法来写。但结构一定要完整。
5、 语言
语言很重要，语言是文章的第一要素。语言看出文采。有的同学选材立意都很好，但语言不好，病句多，前后不能连贯，影响主题的表达。还有的同学语言丝毫没有文采，文章不够生动形象，不能感染人。
文采问题，对作文水平比较高的同学尤其重要。语言要美一点。看有没有比喻拟人排比等修辞手法，有没有注意细节描写，有没有外表语言动作心理描写。看有没有一些抒情的语言，有没有几句耐人寻味的精警的议论，能不能让人回味。
要多读好作文，多练笔，注意文采。
生活的味道
我家门前有一条路，路的两侧种着道不出名字的树。树的样子很普通，我却以为其奇特，因为这树无论在什么季节什么天气，总散发着甜美的味道，或浓或淡，总在人的唇齿间留下麦芽糖般的甜美。
父亲是普通的，但他似乎不像别的父亲那样对子女疼爱不已，他总是显出一别很认真、很严肃的样子。记忆里他似乎从来不向我显示亲热，我从小就没有与父亲拥抱的记忆。他的威严仿佛总在提醒我“父亲就是父亲”。
我想或许父亲与我最为亲近的表现就是握住我的手了。每当过马路的时候，父亲总是先望我一眼，示意我停步，然后就向前走出半步，略居于我前。他很认真地左右观看车流，观定的时候，一伸手握住我的手，一副自然中不经意的样子。父亲的手宽大而厚实，无论在什么季节，父亲手上的温度总是略高于我的。他微用力，遇到车，便略向后带一分力，止我前行。过了马路，父亲便自然地松开了手，微舒一口气，而后便恢复了平静，就如同不曾出现过刚才那一幕一样。门前的这一条路，我也不知道走下了多少遍，从小小的我，到如今的我，每次与父亲出行，他总是领着我。每当这时我便假意留心那路边树的香味，其实那树的味道真有温暖的感觉。
那一次，一次较为重要的考试我考得不好。甚至可以说是很差。我不敢回家。在城市里游荡，虽然我知道他们会着急。天晚了，天上飘起了小雨，我不觉已走到了门前的那条路。我在家的对面徘徊着，我忘记注意周围的一切。不经意间，我看见了父亲，他站在路的那一边，手里拿着一把伞，站在雨里。父亲还是那样静静地、认真的样子。我百感交集，却只是默默地站着。车少了些，父亲看到我了。他向我的方向走来，我依旧呆呆地站着。他走到我身边，淡淡地说了声：“算了，回家吧。”我不清楚“算了”所指何义。他慢慢撑开伞，举在我头顶，望了望来往的车辆，很自然地伸手握住了我。手有些湿，却依然温暖，我已经完全不知是怎样被他领过那条马路，只知道似乎整个路，整个世界只有一只大手握着另一只手。恍忽间，我又嗅到了那树的味道，我惊异于雨天里，这香味还会这般清晰，更伴着泥土的清新。我仿佛深得这树的香味能够融化人心底的什么东西。
我知道这世上有无数车辆穿行的马路，而路上种上这树的少之又少。我不会一直走在门前的路上，但我可以带走这一种香味，如麦芽糖般甜美，那是生活中最好的味道。
生活的味道
寒风呼呼地吹着，直往我的衣领里钻，我赶紧将拉链再向上拉了一点。手伸出来袖管才一会儿，我不禁又打了一个寒颤。
我这阵子，越发觉得生活的乏味和枯燥，整天被书海题为包围，生活除了学习还是学习，我再也发现不了什么别的快乐了，生活真的很苦，我越想越沮丧，干脆不去想了。我继续低着头，顶头寒风往家走去。
刚经过拐角，就听见两个粗而哑的男人的声音，虽然不好听，却透出一种轻松和愉快。我抬起头来，看见两个三轮车夫，坐在自己车子的客座上，正说着什么，不时会憨厚地笑几声。“哼”我心中苦笑了一下：蹬三轮这么苦这么累的活儿，居然还有闲情这样说笑，真是无法体会生活本质的麻木的人们啊!我几乎不作停留，继续向前走。这时，忽然听到刚才的声音仿佛起了争执，我很奇怪，不知发生了什么，便转头朝他们看，而接下来发生的一切却让我为之一震，突然间明白了什么。
一个中年男子向他们走去，要坐其中的一辆三轮车。他并不谈，直接就上了那辆离他近的三轮车。我以为那个三轮车夫会很高兴并且立即做他的生意去，可没想到，他谦恭地对那个中年男子说：“您上那辆车吧，我这车骑起来颠得厉害。”中年男子很是奇怪，愣在那里未做任何反应。而男一位三轮车夫同样奇怪，问道：“你这车不是昨天才修过的吗?怎么，又不好使了?”“不是，这个客就给你拖吧，你今天不过才拖了三四个客，回家你老婆又该埋怨你了。”“不行，不行，他先上的你的车，你又把生意让给我，这讲不过去，不行，不行。”另一个三办车夫连连摆手，表情挺严肃。“都是出来挣钱的人，谁容易啊?你就领了我这份心意吧，我们也认识这么久了。”另一位三轮车夫实在推脱不了，便接受了，他载着那个中年男子，感激地望了一眼他的伙伴，调转车头，开始在寒风中穿行。
看到这一幕，我什么话也说不出来，只深得内心有很复杂的情感。其实，谁的生活不苦呢?可有的人却能够忽略这种苦，因为他们内心充满着爱，心中有爱的人觉得生活是甜的，即使看上去苦，但本质是甜的。我想我真的应该改变一下自己的想法。
生活就是一杯咖啡，如果你在痛苦时喝它，你会觉得它是苦的;而如果你对生活充满爱意，再去喝它时，你会觉得它是甜的。(高二12班成梦佳)
生活的味道
醉过方知酒浓，爱过方知情重，经历过方知乌云背后的彩虹，心灵的波折将日子烘烤得蓬松而略苦，沁出生活味道的厚重。
——题记
外婆病了，病得很严重。 母亲陪外婆去上海求医，不到一个月就回来了。从母亲的眼泪和那几张白纸黑字斩钉截铁不容更改的诊断书中，我知道，外婆留在人间的时间不多了，她已如晚秋的寒蝉。
那段日子里，生活已不再是生活。它化开了糖衣的外表，让我舔舐到了莲心一般的苦涩。
舅舅姨母们不愿放弃最后的希望，将外婆再次转入第一人民医院。于是母亲不得不在工作结束之后匆匆赶向医院，而让我一个人做饭。那时的我才十六岁。
十六岁的我太纯太真，以为自己的劳碌就能换来外婆康复后安详平宁的笑脸。然而，上苍是无情的，外婆最终被宣告治疗无效而回到了家中。当时正值我初三那个寒假，我便有了更多的时间去陪伴疼爱我的外婆。
其实说陪伴，已经毫无意义了。外婆已深度中风，不能说话，不能移动，甚至连眼睛都无法睁开。我看着昔日硬朗而如今昏睡着的外婆，心如刀绞。然而我又能做什么?我只有一遍遍用纸巾擦去外婆当年光洁而如今蜡黄多皱额上不断渗出的黏厚的汗珠，日夜守在她身边，不让她感到孤独罢了。生活已不再是生活，生活的味道为何又要苦浓至此呢?
我的孝心无法感动上苍。一天夜里，我手里半捧着一本中考模拟试卷，正坐在外婆身边打盹时，我突然听到一阵奇怪的声响。我猛然从梦中惊醒，看到外婆正在不停地挪动着，喉间不断地动着，仿佛有痰液堵塞了气管。我扔掉了手中的笔大声呼喊着，母亲他们都冲进了房间。姨妈还哭着提议用吸痰器，被舅舅含泪制止了。我知道，外婆已到了弥留时刻。外婆的喉咙一息一息地，她大口大口地喘着，很快就出气大，入气小„„慢慢地，时间凝成了窒息的灰色，外婆最后挣扎了一下„„走了。永远地走了。我的生活中永远地失去了一种甜甜的味道。那是外婆给我的爱。我大声呼唤着外婆，泪流得满脸都是。生活中的这种味道已消失，留下的只有绵远的回忆。我哭着，用手轻拍着外婆尚有余温的脸颊，抹去外婆额上大片黏浓的汗液。远远地，似乎有一阵疾风，侧耳细听，却又什么都没有了。满世界都是凝固的黑色„„
然而，在殡仪馆和外婆作最后的告别时，我忽然感觉生活中又多了一种非苦非甜、亦苦亦甜的味道。我似乎一下子长大了。我知道，在以后没有外婆的日子里，我会更加坚强，我会不断咀嚼外婆离去的苦涩和她曾经给予我的爱。走过外婆身边时，我心中默念着：外婆的花儿落了，我已不再是小孩子了。最后一滴泪将我的生活中刚失去与刚诞生的味道自然地衔接了起来，构成了我味觉中不可磨灭的风景，让我永久珍藏。(高二37班
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生活的味道
生活就像剥洋葱，一层一层地剥 ，总有一层会使你流泪。
我们总是抱怨，生活太苦啦，整天就是学习，教室、食堂、宿舍三点一线的生活，太单调也太累了。但只要我们用心体会，苦其实并不是唯一的味道。 诗人说“月圆是画，月缺是诗。”昨天正是月圆时，中国传统的中秋佳节。“每逢佳节倍思亲”，这样的日子，我却不得不坐在教室里，复习准备今天的考试，郁闷煞人啊，窗外不时烟花爆竹响起，将夜空点缀得五彩缤纷。一阵阵巨响掠过心头，不禁觉得心酸。不知此时的爸爸、妈妈、弟弟在赏月还是在吃月饼，是否在想着紧张复习的我?
正在写作业，没发觉旁边站了个人，四周叽叽喳喳起来，抬头一看，一下子呆了：是惊讶?激动?是感动?应该是感动更多吧!因为眼睛开始湿润。站在面前微微笑着的，正是我的爸爸!偌大的教室，一个四十多岁的中年人站在一群学生里，不免有些显眼，我顿觉脸上有些发烫，拉着爸爸出了教室。灯光映照下，是一张疲惫的脸，。爸爸手中还拎了一大袋东西，看上去风尘仆仆，我迫不及待地接过口袋，高兴地问：“你怎么来了?”爸爸笑了，说：“我小时候上学，一没东西吃，就会想家。今天中秋，你看人家吃月饼，花生，自己没得吃，肯定要想家了，我就给你带了些月饼、栗子、花生、菱角什么的，有东西吃，就不会想家了。”爸爸一向是个粗人，可却说了这样细腻的话。我惊讶于他的周到和体贴，也为自己开始的脸红而惭愧。我想我是值得骄傲的，有这样的父亲。
爸爸不能久留，我还得继续上自习。临走时，爸爸又嘱咐了几句：“不要太紧张，考试尽力就行，晚上早点睡，考完给家里打电话„„”我一个劲地点头，眼中早已噙满泪水，背着先不让爸爸看见。看着爸爸的背影走向夜色中，他还回头摆手让我进去。一直到看不到他的背景，我才转身，泪水再也忍不住，滚落下来，手中的东西似乎有千斤重。擦干眼泪，我又笑着走进教室。
晚自习下了，走在回宿舍的路上，仰望中秋之月，眼前又浮现爸爸的身影，忽然觉得月圆不仅是一幅绝美的画，也是一首绝佳的亲情诗。
原来苦涩并不是生活的全部，有家人的牵挂，泪水也可以是甜的，生活就像陈年老酒，那味道，越品越香，越品越醉人。(高二15班吕婷婷)
生活的味道
我曾以为，只要给我机会，我就可以显示我在社会上立足的能力。然而我错了。面对着顾客那张怒气冲冲的脸和他衣服上刚洒上去的热咖啡，我不知所措。
“去叫你们经理来!”他大专地说，声音有些吓人。也许声音过大，引来了经理。我受了训斥后，忍着泪水飞奔了出云。
真是的，脸都丢到太平洋了。
懊丧地回到家。家里没人，我索性放声大哭。也只能怪自己太过马虎，碰翻了客人的杯子，可他用得着这样吗?用得着用得着吗?
电话铃响了，是妈妈，说：“回来啦?这半天挺辛苦吧?坚持下去啊!我有事中午不回来了„„”
不回来就不回来吧，免得看见我现在的样子。想起今天出门时自己还声唱“我天不怕地不怕，勇敢大步向前走„„”，可发生这件事情后，今天下午怎么好意思再去呢?也许是天气过于炎热，汗水滴了下来，眼泪也跟着凑热闹，眼前又模糊了。
模糊中，我想起自己曾站在经理而前，认真地说：“我会努力工作的!”我站在妈妈面前也说：“等着看吧，我会做得很好的!” „„这些都是我自己曾经说的，自己不对这些话负责吗?因挨训就“逃”回家，就想放弃，就怕丢人，这样对吗?
于是洗完眼睛就去了咖啡店。经理显然怒气未消，却又很惊讶。“请原谅我上午的行为，再给我一次机会吧!”她立刻笑了起来：“我知道你不会就这么走掉的。只是下次做事要多留心啊!”她走后，一起工作的小李悄悄将我拉进厨房，说：“你没吃饭吧，特地为你留的。”我不知说什么好，不好意思地道谢着。
“小姑娘，这儿有什么特色点心吗?”“有，有„„奶油„„奶油鸡汤，不对，是奶油鸡丝汤，我„„”完了，菜单没有给顾客看，菜名也没背上。我盯着他，想象他的脸就要发生变化„„
“你是新来的吧，没关系，你拿菜单吧，我等着。”他一脸理解的笑。我立刻取来菜单并记录菜名。我心里充满感激，我确只是来暑假实习的，或许他看出来了„„，隔着窗户，我看见外面的太阳好亮啊。
一个月过去了，接过装工资的信封时，心中涌上许多滋味。这就是生活，是生活的味道。它像柚子，皮是苦的，里面的果肉却是甜的，其中还有一种独特的味道。心怀着希望，就会有信心和信念，生活也就不会抛弃我们。
生活的味道
他是个傻子，人们都这么说。他逢人便嘿嘿地笑，不管认识的抑或不认识的。他一咧开嘴，口水就滴滴答答地，顺着衣襟往下淌。
他是这路公交车的“常客”，每次坐固定的位置，手里永远拿着同一份过期的报纸。他喜欢看报纸，但也仅仅是“看”而已，因为他常将报纸拿倒了却不自知。他非常在意别人是不是关注他在看报纸。一旦有人看他，他就会朝那人挥挥手里的报纸，谄媚似的笑笑：“看报纸?”
他还喜欢给人让座。一天，公交车到站了，上来一个步履蹒跚的孕妇。傻子支楞着一双眼盯着孕妇隆起的肚子，半天吐出一句含糊不清的话：“给弟弟坐。”一边不由分说地将孕妇拉到自己的座位上。孕妇红着脸说了声“谢谢”。她满脸堆笑说了好多声“不用谢”。一路上，他威风凛凛昂首挺胸地站在孕妇旁边，像是凯旋的英雄。
傻子做这些的时候，车里没有一个人嗤笑他，甚至连异样的眼光都不曾有过，买菜的老太太、时髦的女郎、染黄发的青年、夹公文包的上班族、不停打手机的中年人，通通都对他行注目礼，车里变得很安静，游离着莫名的感动，呼吸变得很轻，很长，甚至捉摸不定。
还有一次，黄昏的阳光穿透车厢寂寥的灰尘。人群慵懒，面无表情地上车下车，然后各投归宿。我坐在座位上昏昏欲睡。只听见耳边一阵炸雷似的狂叫：“看啊，多美的夕阳!”睁开眼，就看见傻孩子在那儿手舞足蹈。过了一会儿，他又把脸贴在车窗上，贪婪地去看那天边的夕阳。落日通红浑圆，比任何时候都要安详，仿佛要把人世一切的苦难与烦忧都溶在它红彤彤的余晖里。傻孩子几乎把整个身体都贴在车窗上，我看见他的眼里很亮很亮。
我想：做个傻子有时是幸福的，尤其是当他受到足够的尊重的时候。生活于他，好像是一根巨大的棒棒糖，他不停地吸啊吮啊，永远都是那么满足的幸福模样。他总能找到一些美好的东西，比如泛黄的旧报纸，比如红彤彤的夕阳。生活是一粒钻石，要想它熠熠生辉，办要给它点亮光。
高二英语作文范文第2篇
Ⅰ【key points of this period】
1. Words and phrases：defeat, affect, raise, result in, replace …with, come from, play a part in,
on the other hand, take control of, borrow…from. 2. Difficult and important sentences. 1) Many things played a part in the development of this new type of English. 2) French did not replace English as the first language. 3) This resulted in even more words with similar meanings. 4) The words for the meat of these animals came from Old French. Ⅱ【Learning procedures】
Step 1 Listening practice Listen carefully and fill in the blanks
Middle English is the name given to the English used from around the 12th to the 16th century. Many things 1____________ in the development of this new type of English. The most important contribution was from the Normans, a French-speaking people who 2____________ England and took control of the country in 1066. However, the Normans did not 3____________ English as much as the Angles and the Saxon’ victory about 600 years earlier, which 4____________ Old English replacing Celtic. Even though the Normans spoke French for the entire 250 years they 5____________ England, French did not replace English as the first language. On the other hand, the English did 6____________ many words from French. This 7____________ even more words with similar meanings. After the Norman Conquest, many English people 8____________ as servants who raised animals. Therefore, the words we use for most animals 9____________ for food, such as cow, sheep and pig, came from Old English. However, the words for the meat of these animals 10____________ Old French.
Step 2 Reading comprehension Read and answer the questions according to the information given in the passage. 1. What resulted in even more words with similar meanings? (No more than 7 words)
__________________________________________________________________________ 2. Who defeated England and took control of it in 1066? (No more than 8 words)
__________________________________________________________________________ 3. Why did the words we use for most animals raised for food come from Old English? (No more than 13 words) __________________________________________________________________________
株洲市第二中学高三艺术生复习资料 第 1 页 Step 3 Vocabulary and sentence learning
1.Find the sentences which include the following words or phrases from the passage, and then write down their Chinese meanings in the sentences. 1) defeat _____________ 2) play a part in ___________ 3) affect _____________ 4) on the other hand ___________ 5) raise _____________ 6) take control of ___________ 7) result in _____________ 8) borrow…from ___________ 9) come from _____________ 10) replace …with ___________ 2. Fill in the blanks using the correct forms of the words or phrases above. 1) What the teacher said ___________ the students greatly. 2) The peasants ___________ some hens and ducks to support themselves. 3) His failure ___________
his carelessness. 4) On one hand he is a lovely student, ___________ he is good at study, so I like him. 5) Can I ___________ books ___________ the library? 6) Finally we ___________ the enemy. 3. Translate the underlined sentences in the passage into Chinese. 1) Many things played a part in the development of this new type of English. _______________________________________________________________
2) French did not replace English as the first language. _______________________________________________________________
3) This resulted in even more words with similar meanings. _______________________________________________________________
4) The words for the meat of these animals came from Old French. _______________________________________________________________ Step 4 Checking yourself
Have a dictation of the key words, phrases and sentences for today.
Ⅲ【Homework】
1. Fill in the blanks using the correct forms of the given words. 1) The best way _______________(learn) English is to read aloud every day. 2) He ______________(come from)Zhuzhou. 3) What the teachers said ___________________( play a part in) the students. 4) He _______________half of his savings ___________ (contribute to)society last year.
2. Make sentences following the given examples.
1) Many things played a part in the development of this new type of English.
_______________________________________________________________________
2) On the other hand, the English did borrow many words from French. _______________________________________________________________________
3) This resulted in even more words with similar meanings. _______________________________________________________________________
高二英语作文范文第3篇
短文改错的题是一篇意思连贯，但有九行文字中各有一个语法或用词错误的英语短文。它所涉及的知识面很广，能力要求较高。而且题中所设的错误常常是考生自己在写作中经常出的语法错误，是专门针对考生的弱点而设的。但它又从另一个角度考查了语法知识的运用。因此，做题时，应从以下几个方面着手解题：动词使用错误;名词使用错误;形容词，副词使用错误;连词使用错误;代词使用错误;冠词使用错误;介词使用错误，上下文逻辑错误等。
在研究每一行的句子时，首先把握句子的意思，然后划分句子的成分：主语;谓语部分;宾语;状语：地点，时间，方式等。如果句子是并列句或复合句，先分开各部分小的分句，根据各个分句之间的关系判断使用的连词是否正确。然后再研究各个分句的成分。
(一)名词使用错误：名词一般在句中做主语或宾语，名词的错误主要在于名词单，复数的错误使用。
1. They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question.： question是可数名词根据本句的意思，前面有lots of修饰，应当改为复数形式。 2. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics.：subject是可数名词根据本句的意思，前面有quite a few修饰，应当改为复数形式。
3. We practise three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.：根据本句的意思match在此应当改为复数形式。
4. Happy birthday, Peter, and many return of the day. ：return在此是名词，应当改为复数形式：many returns of the day是祝贺人们生日的固定用语：祝你健康长寿。
5. He said that she and my schoolmate all wishes me success.：all 在句中提示了除我以外schoolmate应当是复数形式。
6. On the way up I was taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.：picture应当改成复数形式，因为作者一路上忙于照相，不止仅照一张像。 另外还要注意名词所有格形式上的错误使用。
That kind of lie, a little, does two things: it keeps your friend feeling from being hurt….：根据句子意思：有时一个小小的谎言(善意的)可以使你的朋友的感情免遭伤害friend应当改为friend’s
(二)动词使用的错误：
<一> 作为谓语动词，注意谓语动词在时态，语态，与主语是否一致以及用词方面的问题。 1. My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school team. ：全句的基本时态应当是现在时，was应改为am 2. Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.：主谓一致的错误。Give的主语是Playing football，动名词作主语是单数形式，应改为：gives 3. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.：前半句是说过去的事情used to do ：过去常常做某事。use改为：used 4. …the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down.：时态错误。全句是过去时态，passes 改为passed 5. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.：动词形式的错误。句中有三个连续的动作做谓语。因此visit不是伴随状语，是第二个谓语动词，应该为visited. 6. The Internet is a computer network that use the telephone system to link millions of computers around the world.：句中定语从句中的谓语动词use 的主语是先行词a computer network，是单数形式，所以按主谓一致的原则use改为：uses. <二> 作为非谓语动词，现在分词，过去分词，动名词，不定式形式的使用错误，同时注意非谓语动词在平行结构中出现的错误。
1. Not far from the hotel, there was a shop with all kinds of clothes hang up.：hang up在此做定语修饰先行词clothes，应改为现在分词形式表示挂着各种衣服。
2. He had worked on farms and in shops where he spent his spare time studied by himself.：定语从句是说：他把业余时间花在学习上，按句型结构：spend some time doing something.所以studied应改为：studying. <三> 形容词，副词使用错误：
注意：① 形容词和副词的比较级，原级，最高级使用方面的问题。② 修饰比较级的副词的错误使用。③ 以ing和以ed结尾的形容词的混用。④ 形容词和副词的混用。
1. I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting：much修饰比较级形式，在此没有比较级的意义，所以去掉much. 2. I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.：形容词与副词混用。Have a wonderful time：过得非常愉快。wonderfully 改为：wonderful 3. …his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich family who had no child.：本句含有so…that 句型。very改为：so 4. People will work few hours than they do now. ：这是一个含比较级的句子。(句中有than)，few 改为比较级形式fewer 5. Computers will be more smaller and useful….：比较级smaller前面的修饰词应该是副词much。More与多音节形容词或副词原形构成比较级。more改为much 6. Last week, I went to a movie, which was very moved. 形容词moved指人受到感动。本句的定语从句的主语是movie。应当是moving. <四> 连词使用错误：并列句连词and与but的误用是历年高考题中常考的内容。复合句如宾语从句，状语从句，定语从句中主，从句的连接词的误用根据主从句的关系可以发现。 1. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.：前后两句的关系是并列关系or应改为：and 2. My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. 前后两句是并列关系不具有转折意义。but改为：and 3. It deosn’t matter that I would win or not. Matter后面的从句是whether…or not结构。That改为：whether 4. An Eskimo boy becomes a man since he kills his first polar bear.：根据句子意思：在Eskimo男孩杀死他的第一只北极熊之后，才真正成为一名男子汉。Since改为：after 5. The fine-furniture store ∧I work has been in business since the 1920s.：I work是定语从句修饰先行词The fine-furniture store，The fine-furniture store在从句中做地点状语，应加关系副词where. 解题思路：
首先要理解整个短文的含义，逻辑关系，篇章结构。再仔细研究每一句的意义。借助划分句子成分的方法判断每一部分是否有错误。读句子时一定以整句为单位。 【典型例题】
A(2004全国卷I) Dear Ralph I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. from describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. quiet it seems always difficult for me to do things∧ well as 3. as them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4. at a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5. √
Besides, I have few friends, I don’t know that they 6. why
don’t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 7. talk very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8. strangers once. I am trying to improve the situation since it dosen’t 9. but seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 10. about去掉 分析：
1. 来自一个小镇的新生。强调“来自于”用介词：from 2. describe oneself as +形容词，所以quietly改为quiet 3. 缺少连词，这是同级比较结构as…as ，加上as 4. 介词错误：词组laugh at somebody：嘲笑某人。
6. 宾语从句连词的错误，that 本身没有意义可以省略，本句是说：我不知道他们为什么不喜欢我。
7. 时态错误，全篇用的是现在时。
8. 名词单复数的错误，主语是we，宾语与主语呼应，应该是复数形式。 9. 这是一个并列句，前后为转折关系。 10. 根据句子意思，about多余。
B全国卷III2004 You can find all kinds ∧information in just 1. of a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a 2.minutes huge library without have to walk around to find 3. having your books. Recently even though, many people 4. 去掉even have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. 5. √ They have been reports in America about people 6. There trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 7. personal Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 8. easy information are good to society. For example, you 9. is can find such information like how to kill people. 10. as The problem will become more serious in the future. 分析：
1. all kinds of是固定词组，of 不能缺少. 2. a few 后面的名词是复数形式。minute是可数名词 3. without是介词，后面跟动词ing形式。
4. even though：即使，此处表示“虽然”。应去掉even 6. 此处表示：在美国有报道说…..应当用表示“有…”的句型：there be… 7. 此处表示“个人的信息”，需要用形容词做定语。personal：个人的。 8. is后面是形容词形式。
9. information是不可数名词。后面的谓语动词用单数形式。 10. such…as是固定句型。 【模拟试题】(答题时间：45分钟) A You can find all kinds information in just 1._____ a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a 2._____ huge library without have to walk around to find 3._____ your books. Recently even though, many people 4. _____ have been discussing the dangers of the Internet 5. _____ They have been reports in America about people 6. _______ trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 7._______ Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 8.________ information are good to society. For example, you 9.________ can find such information like how to kill people. 10.________ The problem will become more serious in the future. B This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 1._________
The most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2._________ Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3._________ but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just 4._________ couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 5. _________ about take a picture from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 6. _________ the kitchen looking at me. Shake her hand, she said, ‘It 7. _________ isn’t a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize 8. _________ and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You 9. _________ know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.” 10. ________
参考答案 A 1. 在kinds后面加of ：all kinds of 是固定短语。这里缺少了介词of 2. 名词“数”的错误, minute是可数名词，有a few修饰， 应改为：minutes 3. have改为：having：without是介词，后面的动词应该是动名词形式。 4. 去掉even：even though：即使。此处表示：虽然。 5. 此行正确。
6. They改为：There：本句表示：有一份报告。用there be 句型。 7. person改为：personal：此处指个人的信息，应该用形容词形式。 8. easily改为easy：be后面接形容词。
9. are改为is：主语information是不可数名词。
10. like改为as：such…as为固定句型，表示：象……这样的……。 B 分析：
1. boy是可数名词，第一次提到，前面必须加a 2. 本句是说：欢渡春节。When在此多余. 3. 用词不当，cooker：炊具。Cook：厨师。 4. 前后两个分句是并列关系。
6. be about to do something 是固定句型。 7. Shake her hand在本句中做伴随状语。应该用ing形式。 8. 全句都在叙述过去的事，用过去时。
高二英语作文范文第4篇
1. Now people get a lot of informations from TV. 2. German is a European country. 3. They didn’t want me to do any work at family. 4. Yesterday I met an old friend of my father. 5. Boys and girls, don’t lose hearts. Do better next time. 6. They are of different size. 7. It is so beautiful place that you must visit it. 8. What a terrible weather we have been having! 9. It took place in France, an European country. 10. Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. 11. What good time we had last night! 12. We shall spend three-day holiday together. 13. I came to understand that was not easy to earn money. 14. Some parents think useless for girls to go to school. 15. When he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place. 16. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. 17. It’s important that we should think over before doing anything. 18. The truck was moving so fast that the driver couldn’t control. 19. I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. 20. We must take part in the social practice to prepare us well for our future. 21. The teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance. 22. Henry did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke down. 23. There was a five-pound note in the pocket of the trousers I had told her to wash it. 24. People can hardly do some fishing there. 25. I visited a place where is surrounded by mountains. 26. I am sure you will find one you like it. 27. It was yesterday when he broke the window. 28. He had lost his glasses without them he couldn’t see. 29. Oliver Twist, the hero of the story, he was an orphan. 30. It starts with choosing a tree from neither a farm or a store. 31. She never has enough time for that she wants to do. 32. I find what I have one shortcoming in my character. 33. What necessary it is that we get rid of the bad habits . 34. It didn’t matter that I would win or not.
35. People in the US drink more coffee than people in any country. 36. The development will bring us much more hopes and chances. 37. The Olympics are held each four years. 38. A summer, Fane traveled abroad. 39. I hope you think about my request as soon as possibly. 40. I know you are particular interested in Human Rights. 41. As there is no air or water, there can be no life , too. 42. There were too many nice things that I didn’t know what to choose. 43. He decides to travel a lot and visit such many new places as possible. 44. I couldn’t see as clear as before.
45. The water in it is so dirty that it smells terribly. 46. I appreciate your help very well. 47. You always gave me specially attention and inspired me. 48. It was until midnight that it stopped raining. 49. People both at home and abroad have been great helped by the new computer. 50. He has to work if he wants to live comfortable. 51. She is a brave and honesty girl. 52. It is much easy to make plans than to carry them out. 53. It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam than before. 54. He gave me an order worthy 15 million dollars. 55. The tree was put into a Christmas stand that holds the tree up straightly. 56. Is teaching kids English as interested as you expected in college? 57. We had guests last night who had not stayed in it ago. 58. We are all very much active and the activities are enjoyable. 59. If you won’t want to take a taxi, you can go by bus. 60. Our city is a modern city. It set up in the early 1980s. 61. Bad habits not come suddenly. 62. I have caught a bad cold for a week and I can’t get rid of it. 63. Following the road and you will find the store. 64. I rush over without delay, jumped into the water and swam towards him. 65. You must do everything you can help them. 66. When a rabbit see something dangerous, it runs away. 67. Its tail, which is white, moving up and down as it runs. 68. Think perhaps I was too tired, I stood up and was going to sleep. 69. I was often tired and watch TV demands little effort. 70. The little girl hurried home with the remained money. 71. His young patient was soon able to get up and ran about again. 72. It was kind of them to meet me at the station and drove me to their home. 73. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. 74. There were over 1000 students attend it. 75. Is it likely to be any food at the party on Saturday? 76. Please excuse us for not able to say goodbye to you. 77. He spends hours on the telephone, talks to his friends. 78. Filling with many people, the room is crowded. 79. At the interview there are many people who wait to interviewed for jobs. 80. It will cost a rocket a hundred thousand years to reach it. 81. There used to have a church in front of the school. 82. Hope you great success in your work! 83. All you can do is encouraging him, show him understanding and offer him advice. 84. In Friday afternoon, some students took part in a speech activity. 85. In a few weeks the story was returned to her. 86. It was very fine when I got up early on last Sunday morning. 87. I rushed out the house as quickly as I could. 88. It is necessary to decide what is worth taking notice. 89. I had difficulty in grammar after I entered into the school. 90. She could hardly afford for the medical care. 91. But we don’t seem to have much time to talk about together. 92. He was punished because what he had done. 93. The ice isn’t thick enough for us to skate. 94. I gave you my luggage at a quarter of an hour ago. 95. I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 96. He means to come no earlier as that time. 97. We must return back to school this afternoon 98. Child as he is, but he knows a lot. 99. Having been ill for a long time, so she fell behind her classmates. 100.Thinking he happened to have no work to do, and he came back home.
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高二英语作文范文第5篇
Unit 2 News media
(一) 明确目标
1. To train the students’ ability of listening and speaking 2. To enable the students to talk about the media
(二) 整体感知
Step 1 Making clear the teaching aims
Tell the Ss that in this period we are going to learn something about news media . Step 2 Lead-in 1. Ask the student the following questions : (1) What does news media mean ? (2) How do news media affect our daily life ? 2. Ask the students to look at some pictures and tell what kind of news media it is . 3. Present some pictures for the students to discuss : (1) Which of the news media above is the most reliable? (2) How are the media above different form each other ? (3) How do you know if what you hear , see or read is true ? (4) Do you know how a newspaper is made ?
Step 3 Discussion
1. Have the Ss brainstorm some vocabulary about the news media .
Step.4 Listening 1 Pre-listening (1) Have the Ss brainstorm some words used to describe person. (2) Have the Ss talk about the pictures using their imagination . (3) Make clear the tasks that the Ss are to finish . The Ss will listen to four people talking about something that happened . Part 1 of the tape is an interview and Part 2 is a dialogue . 2. While-listening
(1) Ask the Ss to listen to the tape for the first time and get the main idea . (2) Ask the Ss to tick the information they hear in each part . (3) Check the answers with the class . 3. Post-listening Ask the Ss to discuss the following questions: (1) How and why are the two descriptions of happenings different ? (2) Which one do you like better ? (3) How would you report the event ? Step .5 Speaking
1 Ask the Ss to work in groups
2 Ask some groups to present their results Step 6 Summary and further practice
1 summary
Go over the new words and useful expressions. (1) What do you think of ……? (2) What ’your opinion ? (3) Why do you choose ? (4) I think we should choose ……. (5) Maybe it would be better to choose….. Step 7 Assignments
1 Write a short passage about the description of a person they know .